BUT I got two reviews for the excerpt they read after I progressed to Round 2. This was the first 2 chapters of the book.
Slightly confused as the Expert Reviewers contradict each other (one really likes it the other doesn't) and the whole point of the Fantasy genre is that it is, by its very nature, fantastical. While an intubated child might not be in her own room, this protocol was ignored by both Rick Grimes's nurses and Jim the bicycle courier's doctors. It's called artistic licence. Or dramatic effect. Or Making Shit Fit With The Plot. While it may be unbelievable, so is having a 7 feet tall guy wearing a sword teleport into a hospital room.
Sour grapes? Just a bit!